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Post by [x]S.i.l.e.n.t.s.t.o.r.m[x] on Mar 29, 2008 8:29:19 GMT
BC deputy auditions are now open.
To successfully audition you MUST do an RP on your cat in warrior life.
All words must be SPELL-CHECKED, PUNTUATED and CAPITALISED where needed. |
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Post by wild~bones_daughter on Mar 29, 2008 17:39:13 GMT
wild sniffed the air no one she sunk out of camp. those smelly old clan cats are going to pay for killing her mother and father she was going to make them paw dearly. she walked into thunderclan camp everyone was asleep. first she sinked into the apprentices den she cut and scratched every inch of the apprentices they didn't wake up. blood and fur lay on the ground everywhere but that was not enough. she walking into the nursery. she took one kit from every queen and dragged in out to the clearing. the kits began to cry because of the cold weather. she slashed the kits throats in no time. blood covered her fur now but she was just about done. she walked over to the leaders den, in side firestar slept. this is for scourge she hisses and took one of his lives with a swipe of her paw. now she was done she walked out to the stream and cleaned her fur. then she took the long journey back to bloodclan camp. when she returned she walked strait into the leaders den the cat who calmed himself leader was claw the lowest dirtiest rat brain bloodclan has ever scene , and this low life cat was not going to be leader a kit would be better then him. she jumped on him in his sleep killing him within minutes. her must never know she killed one of there own so she left to live by her self till this blew over. about 3 moons later she followed the clan cats to there new Camp and there she fond... BLOODCLAN!!!. as soon as they saw her they new just who she was. wild of bloodclan the great and noble. they explained what happened after she left she told them how she killed claw because he was no leader but they did not care. she wonder who was the leader now? glare her old clan mate of course he was strong fast and bold. now she wanted to be leader so badly but she could not kill her own friend so she waited for the cover of night walked into the warriors dens and pulled the deputy from his nest in the clearing he awoke. " whats going on?" he asked " you are not fit to be bloodclans deputy and future leader i am so now you will DIE!!"she yowled quietly to him and lept for him them battled for some time but he fell over and exposed his belly her chance and she took it the deputy was dead! she washed the blood from her fur and claws then took her fur out of his claws and put his own in his claws then no one would know she killed him!
now when everyone saw him dead, there would be only one chose for glare to make the strongest boldest swiftest cat alive to be the deputy and her name was, Wild.
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Post by [x]S.i.l.e.n.t.s.t.o.r.m[x] on Mar 29, 2008 18:37:24 GMT
Hmm... Nor capitalised but good... very good.
You are new deputy.
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Post by wild~bones_daughter on Mar 29, 2008 18:40:50 GMT
Thank you veyr much silentstorm!! i will the best daputy you have ever seen.
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Post by [x]S.i.l.e.n.t.s.t.o.r.m[x] on Mar 29, 2008 18:44:34 GMT
Good ^^
Don't forget to capitalise in RPs!!
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Post by wild~bones_daughter on Mar 29, 2008 18:47:26 GMT
I wont!!! lol
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Post by [x]S.i.l.e.n.t.s.t.o.r.m[x] on Mar 29, 2008 19:01:47 GMT
Good ^^
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Post by wild~bones_daughter on May 6, 2008 23:02:46 GMT
thank you
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